And on top of all that, I had an idea. You can call it a "what if".
What if I changed the setting of my story? What if instead of it being a typical fantasy background, I set it in the modern day? What kind of complications would that produce? How would Fury survive? Could she survive?
Lots of intriguing questions. But there is another one that is even more important:
Would it work?
Let's say that it would. A modern setting would mean getting rid of some of the main plot points. A modern-day Caden probably wouldn't set out on a quest to solve a curse for his one true love. He'd be cruising around in a sports car looking tough. Which would mean that I would have to find a different reason for him to go searching for Fury. Endless possibilities.
So, will I do it?
Nah, probably not. First things first: Fury is hideously deformed. In the here and now, we're not very nice and Fury would be hard-pressed to escape EVERYONE. Sure, she could keep to the forest but then what would be the point of having a modern setting?
It's intriguing to think about, however. Changing one thing in a story can have a ripple effect. You think that something like Where wouldn't be that relevant, especially if it's a character-driven story, but it is, and I find that amazing.
Things besides setting can have the same effect. One sentence can change a whole scene. It sounds crazy and intense, but that's how it is. I'm discovering that in Dragon Queen. I'm playing with a scene right now. Last night I had an idea on how to introduce Drake back into the story, but in order to do that, I have to change almost everything that I have written for Ch. 19. And then there is everything that follows that just doesn't fit anymore. It's frustrating sometimes. But that's just another one of the many joys of writing.
Interesting concept regarding "Fury", but like you said, it probably wouldn't be for the best. It's fun to think about stuff like that sometimes, though.
ReplyDeleteWith Web, I had (several times) considered rewriting the whole thing to be from a single viewpoint, Jarus. Almost the entire novel would have to be rewritten, though, and the thought of that made me cringe. It turned out I was just being paranoid about certain parts not being up to par with the rest of it.
And regarding one little thing changing a lot...
I recently (just last night) had that happen to me, too. I changed one line at the end of a certain scene, which then required rewriting the first half of the scene that followed. Frustrating? Yes. But worth it.