Perhaps the hardest part of editing your work is recognizing its weaknesses. Here are some tips:
- Use a spell/grammar check on a regular basis. And be sure to do this BEFORE you ever let someone look at your work.
- Notice overuse of words or phrases. Everyone has their favorite word, and sometimes it can sneak in without the writer noticing. If you're using Word, you should be able to do a "Find". If you notice instances of the same words together, try to think of a replacement.
- Then ask someone to read your story. Not your mom. Not your friend. But, preferably, another writer or editor. You want someone who will give you honest and valuable feedback. Save the ego strokes for after the book is published. For this step, I highly recommend joining a critique group or finding a beta reader. A critique group will offer an array of opinions and suggestions, of which you can find a common thread. This will help you recognize not only the little flaws of your story (awkward sentences, confusing imagery) but the big pitfalls (sloppy plot, one-dimensional characters).
- When you receive your feedback, be sure to ask for specifics. If someone says, "I just didn't like it" ask why. After a few pointed questions, you should get to the heart of the matter: didn't like the characters; the plot was predictable; etc.
- Finally, when you believe your story has reached its full, wonderful potential--set it aside. Don't look at it (and try not to think about it) for at least a month. Sometimes, you might even wish to take longer. After you feel as if the story has finally been on the back burner long enough where it will appear "fresh" to your eyes, comb through it again. Often, this will help you pick up on the mistakes (story contradictions, wrong word usage, etc.) that might have slipped by you the first time. Also, it will help you rediscover the "flow" of the story.
On that note, happy writing!
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